We are learning to write a story that flows and shows a sequence.
My story is a day in a life of a shoe
A Day In A Life Of A Shoe
Oh here we go again! He’s looking for me. I can hear Lukas's Mum saying, "Lukas find your new shoes or you will go to school in bare feet!!!.
"No!" he said as he came into the room looking for his shoes.
As he came towards the bed, I was getting really excited, like a 6 year old at a birthday party.
He reached under the bed to grab me with his small hands like the softest pillow in the world.
I felt really, really, really, happy that I'm the chosen one.
He ran to his Mum. He yelled "Mum, Mum, Mum, I've found my new shoes"
Oh i haven't had fresh air for 2 weeks ! Lukas took me to school. He was tripping over and I got a rip in me.
It was when he was waiting at the rock. Then we went home and he hid me so his Mum didn't see it.
cool
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