Hero Poem

First we wrote rhyming words in our books about heroes. Then I started to create my poem and then I put it all together. Here is mine.

Hero Poem.

Everyday heroes make you responsible.

Then make you impossible.

They help you learn

Then you will earn

They make you love your mum

Then you will hum

Heroes are loving and playing

They are all ways sharing and caring

Everyday heroes are a superhero

And they can be zero

Heroes are protecting

But we should never forget that heroes are always  helping.

New Zealand Flag Debate

Last term we learnt about the New Zealand Flag Debate. We looked at our current flag and we came up with our own new ideas for New Zealand. We did 3 prototypes here is a picture of my final design.

















I asked some people for some feed back
Ben Scott - better angle. Change the Union Jack back round and change the koro
Chyna's feedback - Put a bigger kiwi and make it neater

I put a koru on it  because it's part of our Maori culture. I put blue on it because it is the water.

I put 4 stars because it's already on our flag. I put the Union Jack because it's already on our flag.

Cinquain Winter Poem

For writing I did a Cinquain winter poem. We learnt how to write a Cinquain winter poem. here is mine.

winter

cold , chilly

snow fight,ice

happy , cold , sleepy , wonderful

season